Wednesday, September 6, 2017
Tuesday, August 22, 2017
Once upon a time there lived a young beautiful girl named Cinderella. When her mother passed away Cinderella’s father married another wicked woman who had her own two daughters named Pearl and Paige.The stepmother and stepsisters did not like a single bit about Cinderella. After Cinderella’s father died Cinderella became a slave in her own house.She had to sleep in the cold attic.
Cinderella had to wear ragged clothes. One sunny day as Cinderella was cleaning the front entrance of her house a loud bang hit the door. Cinderella opened the door and outside the door a short man stood and said “there shall be a grand ball at the castle at noon. Every maiden is invited.” Cinderella was so excited she took it to her stepmother straight away.
The stepmother and stepsisters went bonkers when they read the letter. Cinderella asked kindly she said “ please may I come to the ball too?” The stepmother and stepsisters laughed and laughed and said “ Will you come to the ball in those ragged clothes?”
“I will knit my own clothes.” Cinderella said. Cinderella found one of her mother's dresses and knitted little accessories to make it look prettier. As she walked down the staircase the stepsisters and her step mother looked at Cinderella and felt jealous at how beautiful she looked. They started ripping her clothes. First they ripped the shoulder then the neckline. Cinderella’s dress was ruined top to bottom. The carriage arrived at the house and Cinderella couldn't help but start crying as she looked at her cruel stepmother and stepsisters stepped into the carriage. Cinderella run to her garden. Suddenly out of nowhere a blue light appeared and it was her fairy godmother.
The fairy godmother asked Cinderella why she was crying. Cinderella replied, “Dear fairy godmother my stepmother and stepsister tore up my dress and I can’t go to the ball”.
Fairy god mother said, “Get me three mice, a pumpkin, a goose and two lizards. Cinderella got as she was told. Fairy Godmother said “ bibbity bobbity boo”. The pumpkin turned into a golden carriage, the lizards turned into footmen and the mice turned into horses. Cinderella was amazed by the work her fairy godmother did. Cinderella was about to step into the carriage when she realised her dress was torn to pieces.
Cinderella said “ Fairy godmother, my dress, my dress is in pieces. How can I go the ball?”
The fairy godmother took her wand and pointed gently to the torn up dress Cinderella was wearing. With the flick of Fairy Godmothers wand, Cinderella’s old dress turned into a pretty blue dress. Fairy godmother said “ hurry up dear you will be late and just remember the spell will end at 12 o’clock. Cinderella said “ That is more than I expected. Bye bye fairy godmother” and off she went to the ball.
Cinderella reached the castle and carefully stepped out of the carriage. As soon as the Prince saw her, he fell in love with her. The Prince asked Cinderella if he could dance the first and the second dance with her. Cinderella agreed and they went off to dance. The stepmother and the stepsisters did not recognise Cinderella but they were certainly felt jealous. Soon 12 o’clock struck. Cinderella run down the staircase, the Prince chased after her. While Cinderella was running one of her shoes fell off but she could not go back and get it. She had to keep on running.
The next day came everyone was talking about the mystery princess. The prince was very sad he said “we have to find the princess with this shoe. The guards went to every house and every bakery. They finally came to Cinderella’s house. They tried every maidens foot, finally they got to Cinderella’s foot and she tried it on. It fitted perfectly.
The guards took Cinderella and her stepmother and stepsister to the palace. Cinderella married the prince and the stepmother and stepsisters went to jail and they lived happily ever after.
This week we have been writing fairy tales and we had to change the ending. I said the step mothers and stepsisters go to jail.
Tuesday, August 15, 2017
Tuesday, August 8, 2017
Where am I ?
As I walk through the sliding doors I see people having hours of fun. I feel a gush of wind coming from the sliding doors. I walked into the corridor and waited for a room so I could change. The corridor was freezing cold. Someone slowly stroked out a room. I snatched the room so no one else could take it. I' could finally change and take a deep dive.
comment on my blog if you know where I am
Sunday, August 6, 2017
The cold breeze hits the side of my face as I stand in line for McDonald’s.
I see people ordering food at the counter.I hear people ordering food at the same time.The smell of chicken,ham and cheese come out nice and fresh from the oven.The chicken nuggets make my nose twitch in excitement.
I go and sit down at a long hard stone table. I bite into a squishy chicken burger and at the end my tummy tingles and that makes me laugh.
This week Miss Catherine has taught us how to describe a place using the 5 senses.
Thursday, August 3, 2017
Three Way Conferences - Thinking Hats for Year 4-6
What are the facts about school? What concepts have you learned about? What have you been involved in?
Share a piece of work that you are proud of. Talk about the process of creating it. What new skills did you learn? What have you done well?
What is an area that you need to improve in? Share a piece of work that you found challenging. What do you need to do to improve? Do you need some help?
Reading Age: 8.5 - 9.5 yrs
Writing Level: level 2
Maths strategy stage:E 5
Maths knowledge stage: 5
Inquiry Topics: Taonga, Functions
Work I will share: Happy face biscuits
Children should bring their own devices to school
Work I will share: How to play Rachael’s cup call
What are your feelings about your learning? What makes you happy at school? Is there anything that worries you?
What are your thoughts about your learning? How are you doing overall?
So what now? Create some goals with your teacher and your parents. Is there something your teacher or you parents can help with? (these could be started at your three way conference and finished later).
When I write on the computers
I feel sad when I get a low point in maths
My Strengths: Is writing
My Challenges: maths
By … I will have..
Maths stage 5
Use basic facts knowledge with word probles
Tuesday, August 1, 2017
Awful Auntie is the main character of the story Awful Auntie. She has a niece named ‘Stella’ who is 12 years old.She has a great Bavarian mountain owl.Awful Auntie and Stella live in Saxby hall.
Awful Auntie is a cruel person when it comes to the point that Stella has to go to sleep Awful Auntie changes the end of the story for example Goldilocks and the three bears, the bears eat Goldilocks and Goldilocks never returned home.Awful Auntie is a cheater when she plays her one favorite game tiddly winks she always cheats so she can be the best and become a winner!.When she was young she would sing “I’m the best I’m the best and nobody can beat me!”
Awful Auntie looks weird she wears old fashioned hunting cloths which includes gloves it was made in the 1913’s. Her great Bavarian owl seats on her gloves with Awful Auntie weas.
Awful Auntie smokes a pipe.When she blows her pipe and when that smoke dashes its way out it looks like rain clouds.
She loves playing eliv pranks on people and animals.